Tuesday, 8 May 2018

part 2 hank

 American Dream mentioned the idea that everyone has the same opportunity to be successful However, In the roaring nineteen twenties, the huge gap between the rich and the poor made life very difficult for the people of the lower classes. They do not have unlimited resources and opportunities as the upper classes do. They are not recognized, they have only one label-the poor. However, this loss of personal identity, so that people do not know for them what success is. So the American dream is just a dream for them, and the purpose of their life is to survive

In the great Gatsby novel, Mr. George Wilson is a representative of people who loss their individual identity. As a man, he didn't have all the character that a man had at that time. Also in the family he also seems to be the weak one. In Chapter 7 of the novel , the author writes  He was his wife's man and not his own. (7) From this we can see that the American dream does not belong to Wilson, because he is not George Wilson, he is Myrtle's husband. So he can never achieve the American dream because he does not have the personal identity. George Wilson represented the lower class in the American society at that time. They lacked their personal identity. They don't know who they are and what success means., they only worked for survival.    So the American dream does not belong to the lower class.I think the tragic story of George shows the essence of the American dream, that is, the American dream belongs to upper class, the upper class people have unlimited resources and opportunities and they have no shortage of individual identity , but for those of the lower class, the American dream is only a kind of extravagant hope.

I think society should change. The first step is to prevent the continuation of discrimination from an educational point of view. America's deep-rooted class discrimination has something to do with its history of colonization, so educational change is necessary. Second, Adopt corresponding economic policies to narrow the gap between the rich and the poor. Third, tell people the importance of individual identity through the media.

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1 comment:

  1. Hi, Hank. This is Jason. I really like your article structure and reasoning process. It is very clear and making me easy to follow. Although the final article typesetting has some defects, the content is good.
    However, in paragraph 2, I find that you just linked the loss of individual identity to the inability for owning the American dream. You only have a short analysis.
    I think you should point how the individual identity connect to the American dream. I mean the analysis should be more detailed and deeper. Maybe you can explore the individual identity’s deep meaning, which can help your further analysis.
    And you just used one proof. I think one proof is not good for in-depth analysis. This makes the level and process of analysis not easy to be reflected.
    Besides, you did not choose another character from the novel to compare with Wilson and you did not compare the American dream in the novel to the media example from your part 1.

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