American dream,
firstly in my view, means a fair society for everyone to pursue both material success
and spiritual success through their efforts, no matter what class they were
from. However, it has become imbalance. Actually,
Americans simply pursue wealth but ignore spiritual developments. Gatsby represents
the material dream best in the novel, because he soon became rich though he was
from the underclass. Then he moved to a big house and usually holds grand parties
with the rich, which is a way to show how successful he becomes. Gatsby’s
materially success shows the flourishing aspect of American dream. It seems
that everyone has equal opportunities to become wealthy.
When it comes to
the spiritual dream, the picture is different. Gatsby’s spiritual dream is an
illusion in that society, which causes his inevitable failure. Daisy is not
like the kind, pure girl that she used to be. Unfortunately, she becomes selfish
after many years’ life. However, the former perfect Daisy in Gatsby’s dream have
not existed any more. It is impossible to pursue an inexistent girl. The
tragedy is that he devotes everything to his beautiful fantasy, while the fact
is opposite. Whatever, Gatsby is still great, because he is still pure and
yearns for his beautiful dream, though he is in a superficial society. He represents
the initial American Dream both materially and spiritually, while his failed to
realize his spiritual dream. Ironically, the pure dreamer finally dies
distressingly in the society with ‘American Dream’. Both Daisy’s corruption and
Gatsby’s death are caused by the sick society with imbalanced dream.
The material comparisons
were ridiculous in that era. The new money looked down upon the poor, while
they were looked down upon by the old money. American dream provided more
opportunities. But it broke people’s relationship. Everyone became snobbish and
money-oriented. For example, Gatsby wrongly thinks that wealth can help him
realize everything. In fact, most of the guests including Daisy look down upon
Gatsby, because few people would respect a new rich. They make fun of Gatsby in
the parties and just think the parties of free entertainment places. Even in Gatsby’s
funeral, few of them come. All of above shows the imbalance between material
and spirit in American dream, which made the dream finally corrupted. As a result,
Americans became fond of hedonism and ignored their spiritual developments then.
According to my Part 1, the way Americans
consider the American dream is becoming more and more realistic and material. Americans
simply link the dream to wealth, so they can never realize how significant diversity
is for America. The old money can represent the local whites, and the new money
can represent people from other races or other countries. Most whites don’t
want to separate their cake and become selfish and ignorance. They don’t know
the reason why American is great is its diversity and refuse to be kind. It is
the conflicts between material and spirit, which was originally caused by the
imbalance American Dream.
PART 3-- Hawk Lyu's comment for Leo
ReplyDeleteHi Leo,
I like your idea about the American Dream ignore spiritual developments, which suggest the social values is superficial in the 1920s. However, the summary in your first two paragraph make your opinion feels week, you can choose a particular example and analyze it.You choose Gatsby and Daisy as your character analysis, but you should add some quotations from the book to prove your idea.
Also, you can add how you feel about the American Dream by giving the example from your experience to make your opinion more personal.
I like you talk about "The old money can represent the local whites, and the new money can represent people from other races or other countries. " It is interesting that you compare old money as local white and new money as people from other races, then analyze how they affect our today society, but still need to add more explanation on it.I suggest you can talk more about how American dream is becoming more and more realistic that lead to the significant diversity is for America.
Finally, I think you can connect your photo to your idea that makes the idea more visual.
Thank you.
Hawk